Talk:Catwoman (Michelle Pfeiffer)/@comment-73.19.93.66-20151014074053

I have now read a couple of your "reviews," and now am forced to comment that your attempts to write in a manner that clearly does not represent your true self is reallly annoying. I'm sure that stung, but bear with me to the end...

I appreciate what your intentions are, but your use of certain words - words that you obviously have selected for the sole purpose of impressing a reader and providing a 'wow' factor - has the exact opposite result when they aren't used correctly or are randomly thrown into the mix. A perfect example? "...Selina sacrificed her penultimate life...." Who uses the word "penultimate?" NO ONE! The word smacks of some cheesey description you'd find on the back of a low-rated video game. The only thing you have accomplished by randomly tossing in such words is to turn potential readers off. You would be far better served if you spent your time productively by proofing your document, checking your grammar, using spellcheck, and making sure you have used words that the average reader doesn't have to look up in a dictionary.

Further, if it is your intention to attract an audience that you may consider more urbane, more educated or more sophisticated, then be consistent with not only your lofty terms, but also make sure you are using such terms correctly. Look them up in a dictionary and make sure you understand their meaning. Make sure that the surrounding sentences and paragraphs actually support these words, otherwise using them makes you look uneducate and a bit desperate.D

Did you stay with me?.I really hope so! I'm sorry if this was harsh, but you seem as if you truly enjoy the writing process. Keep practicing!!! Take as many writing classes as are offered (because you learn something new with each class theme, each teacher, and with each new group of students)!!! And, above all else, be true to your inner-author!!!!